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Date: Monday, 2013 Dec 16, 20:18 GMT | Message # 31
Date: Tuesday, 2013 Dec 17, 01:37 GMT | Message # 32
Ref # 31 Awesome! Lay where you"re laying, don"t make a sound I know they"re watching, they"re watching, All the commotion, the kiddie like play Has people talking, talking, " Yes " Summer is on fire " Yes " Summer is on fire ! (Kings Of Leon), Awesome ( Flaming May ),
Date: Wednesday, 2013 Dec 18, 00:31 GMT | Message # 35
What about Summer"s shows like (Alphas - Skylar Adams, or maybe The 4400 as Tess Doerner, or that amazing guest appearance as herself on The Big Bang Theory, or maybe the guest appearance on the Hawaii Five-O, as Maggie Hoapili, not sure if these are any help with The screencaps for the calender, Great June Page month for my Birthday.
Date: Wednesday, 2013 Dec 18, 01:46 GMT | Message # 36
Date: Wednesday, 2013 Dec 18, 06:12 GMT | Message # 38
Fixed! Thanks for the correction.
No problem! Since spotting this one I also noticed a couple of others, tiny things for the strictest grammar and consistency:
Only some pages include a surname like December does.
January Cameron is without surname, it's debatable but is written as Cameron Phillips in many places including Terminator Wiki: http://terminator.wikia.com/wiki/Cameron
February page might do with a comma "Also, I can..." while river is without her surname.
March page the capitalisation is inconsistent it reads 'I Don't Dance, I echo.' I think you don't need those capital Ds, but should instead give a capital B to 'Prima ballerina' because 'Prima Ballerina' is the character name so it's a proper noun in the instance like any other surname: http://buffy.wikia.com/wiki/Prima_Ballerina
Also the quote is in '...' instead of "..." like it is on Jan & Feb pages, I'm not sure which are more correct, but I think "..." is better because its a spoken quote rather than a written one.
November quote is also in '...' instead of "..."
May page is lacking either '...' or "..." and is also short of a ? at the end
June also lacking either '...' or "..." and the question mark is there this time but it belongs at the end of the quote disposing with the need for capitalisation on the word 'Aside...'
I also think the full stop following the character name and show title should be disposed of on all pages (just my feeling) and all of the show titles should be italicised because its conventional.
Lastly, not wanting to overstep and be too critical, I think there are potentially better quotes available for April, although they wouldn't necessarily match the image as well due to being from different scenes. This last thing is obviously just my opinion and not a correction :P
Thanks for your hard work, I hope this helps.
Date: Saturday, 2013 Dec 21, 09:49 GMT | Message # 42
Date: Saturday, 2013 Dec 21, 09:55 GMT | Message # 43
Skylar page looks great! I'm happy that you chose a picture with the punk style for this. I'd said I would keep looking for Orwell quotes and I had struggled a little bit but I think maybe this is ok:
'Take a bite out of your sandwich; we've got an audience.'
I had a couple others but i didn't wanna bombard you again and need to check a few quotes.
About Gwen, 'Finish him!' would be the obvious choice, but there might be better.