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Summer Glau short story
Date: Sunday, 2012 Dec 09, 03:26 GMT | Message # 1

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Hi everyone! This is a short story I made of the Simon and River scene after the bar fight in the maidenhead when Simon's talking to River about her saying "Miranda"

http://www.wattpad.com/9573547....-squish

I hope you guys like it smile

I added some of my own dialouge smile


☮"Just because no one has been fortunate enough to realize how wonderful you are, doesn't mean you shine any less." - Summer Glau☮
 
 
Date: Sunday, 2012 Dec 09, 03:44 GMT | Message # 2

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I hope you all like it smile

And I'm sorry for the grammar errors


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Date: Sunday, 2012 Dec 09, 03:54 GMT | Message # 3

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I enjoyed the story so much I didn't notice the grammar errors. Very good job at weaving new and existing material together.
The relationship between Simon and River was my favorite in Firefly/Serenity. You brought it back home again. Thank you.


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Date: Sunday, 2012 Dec 09, 04:23 GMT | Message # 4

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Thank you smile

I plan do to more. (write more I mean)


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Date: Tuesday, 2012 Dec 11, 03:13 GMT | Message # 5

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no problem smile

River and Simon are awesome!


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Date: Wednesday, 2012 Dec 12, 01:16 GMT | Message # 6

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Good job and good story even if I didn't catch all at 100% but this is because of my translation "English -> French" ^^

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Date: Wednesday, 2012 Dec 12, 04:30 GMT | Message # 7

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Thank you!

I'm sorry it may be because of my grammar but thanks smile


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Date: Wednesday, 2012 Dec 12, 23:53 GMT | Message # 8

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Don't apologize lol it's me, who am not very good at English ^^

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Date: Thursday, 2012 Dec 13, 00:15 GMT | Message # 9

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well done terminatoremily, put together brilliantly the short story, simon and river form a great relationship together always and forever,and deeply true love for his sister, smile
 
 
Date: Thursday, 2012 Dec 13, 00:39 GMT | Message # 10

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I agree River and Simon are so cute!!

Thank you!

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Date: Thursday, 2012 Dec 13, 06:13 GMT | Message # 11

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Quote (TerminatorEmily)
Hi everyone! This is a short story I made of the Simon and River scene after the bar fight in the maidenhead when Simon's talking to River about her saying "Miranda"

http://www.wattpad.com/9573547....-squish

I hope you guys like it smile

I added some of my own dialouge smile


Good work Terminator Emily. I liked the story and I liked what you did to add to the original.

Here are two suggestions:

1. For any dialogue, I think it is a good idea to read it out loud. Get a sense of how it sounds. Perhaps you could ask your friends to read it with you. Then, if there is something a bit awkward or something that does not quite sound right, it will stand out.

2. Write, write, write. The more drafts you write, the better. And read, read, read. Clearly you are already doing this. By reading other writers, a writer will find things out about how to refine and develop their own writing.


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Date: Thursday, 2012 Dec 13, 15:25 GMT | Message # 12

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Here are two suggestions:

1. For any dialogue, I think it is a good idea to read it out loud. Get a sense of how it sounds. Perhaps you could ask your friends to read it with you. Then, if there is something a bit awkward or something that does not quite sound right, it will stand out.

2. Write, write, write. The more drafts you write, the better. And read, read, read. Clearly you are already doing this. By reading other writers, a writer will find things out about how to refine and develop their own writing.
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Thanks for that. smile I'll keep those in mind smile


☮"Just because no one has been fortunate enough to realize how wonderful you are, doesn't mean you shine any less." - Summer Glau☮
 
 
Date: Thursday, 2012 Dec 13, 15:26 GMT | Message # 13

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whoops I never meant to quote thank for that nevermind I meant to quote your suggestions whoops! :P

But I'll say it again

Thanks smile


☮"Just because no one has been fortunate enough to realize how wonderful you are, doesn't mean you shine any less." - Summer Glau☮
 
 
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